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First stanza is the kind of wheedling and complaining that
is familiar enough to a reader of Dream Songs: “Sluggish, depressed, & with
no mail to cheer, / he lies in Ireland’s rains bogged down, aware / of definite
mental pain.” Oh, well. Gosh. Okay. I generally go for a walk, and if it’s
raining, so much the better. Rain cheers me up. But this first is mainly to set up the overall rainy afternoon
gloom of the scene and leads to the 2nd. He has an interview in
London approaching, with some women with whom apparently he had some flings once
upon a time. They were “frolicsomes” then, but never married: “must he impute
to them their spinsterhood / & further groan, as for the ones he stood / up
and married fair?” Yeah, I get it. Look, the term “spinster” wasn’t good in
1967, and it’s doubly insufferable now, so this disconsolate poem is not
looking very promising. Third stanza: “Connection with Henry seemed to be an
acre in Hell,”…um…sure, let me vouch for that… “Doubtless a bell / ought to
have been hung on Henry / to warn a-many lovely ladies off.”
Good idea. This whole thing is a doleful exercise in afternoon
gloom and tragicomic depression. Eeyore the Donkey, with a rain cloud over his head
Yeah, and here's a response to that, from another lovely lady.
It's quite an image, though, B wearing a bell. That acid humor again.
ReplyDeleteI still want to just slap him I'm afraid.
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