Kobayashi Issa is recognized one
of the four great Japanese haiku masters. B. refers to his account of the death
of his father, Last Days of Issa’s Father,
which recounts the poet’s father falling ill with a fever, and of the son’s
intense emotional impressions of family conflict, everyday occurrences, and the
decline and death of his father. It’s a classic in Japanese literature.
B. had been drinking heavily and
writing the Dream Songs obsessively, the two activities linked for him. He
wrote DS 54 from the hospital, having been admitted due to severe alcohol
poisoning which very nearly killed him. The details are reflective of his stay,
including the “nitid” feeling of sparkling or brightness brought on by the
drugs the medical staff administered. He forced himself to slow down because
the writing, connected absolutely with drinking, was getting to be too much to
handle.
Obsessiveness and alcoholism,
real things, still lead toward a reflection on Issa and B.’s father. Here are
five winter haiku, in honor of Issa:
Winter
Haiku
Crows raucous by day
Owl proclaims the trees at nightForest’s pendulum.
Tracks
of hungry deer
Broken
crusts of icy snowGreen a memory.
Black-capped chickadee
Scolding the snowy feeder
Hot in annoyance.
Cold
wind bites my ear
Ear responds
with heat and bloodChallenging winter.
Points of sharp sunshine
In icicles remind me
How cold is the sun.
KZ
Nice haiku.
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icicle sharp sun-
shine reminds me: the sun is
cold, the sun is cold
tracks of hungry deer
ReplyDeletebreak apart the snow—
green . . . mere memory
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ReplyDeletetracks of hungry deer
break apart the icy* snow—
green . . . mere memory
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Fookin' Jaysus!
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Hah! Thanks, Dirk. These are always first drafts, of course. I'll take the tinkering under advisement when the time comes.
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