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“A maze of drink” declares Henry’s drink, will ease one’s
way through life’s complexities, which is drink’s standard lie. This
pronouncement prompts an immediate mention of Hobbes and his biographer,
Aubrey, all to begin a poem about the breeze in Ireland. Hobbes, who famously
categorized life as nasty, brutish and short, is told by a waxing Henry that
life certainly isn’t any worse than that, and it’s not even that bad. So, this
appears to be record of a good day. After that it’s all about the breeze that smartly
snaps a flag, ruffles the gorgeous boats on the bay, a seagull is calling, and
across the water lies home in all its arrogant powerful complexity,
condescending a touch to Ireland, but strife-torn Ireland was a problematic
ally in those days. The sight of a waving American flag overseas stirs up a
nuanced pride. There’s no helping it. But what matters more is not the flag and
all it symbolizes, but that the wind is blowing through the flag.
Fresh breezes do seem to have a cleansing effect, don’t
they? A friend once told me that as a Libra, an air sign, I should take
periodic air baths. This is advice I take now and then, when wind and isolation
conspire to provide for one. It does indeed sweep out the cobwebs. This poem
begins with alcoholism and Hobbes—typical ugly shit for a Dream Song—but a breeze
off the Channel blows through it and freshens things up quite nicely. It’s an
air bath of a poem. Politics, alcohol and a degrading competition for resources
don’t stand a chance in the face of such a freshet. Not every work of art has
to shake up this planet, crowded with humans. Let a breeze blow through your
poem, and the writer and reader benefit from breeze’s rejuvenating power.
Tinged with salt, carrying the cries of a seagull. Clean.
This is probably a nicer poem than I at first gave it credit for being.
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